After Jay feedback on my last post, I worked on tightening the copy and removing the seasonality and competitor references to focus purely on missed emergency calls = lost jobs. Here’s the revised version: Subject line: Missed Call {{First_name}}? Hi {{First_name}}, When an emergency call comes in after hours and no one answers,that job usually goes to the next company on the list. I’m offering restoration companies a free after-hours AI receptionistthat answers every call, captures job details, and notifies the team instantly. No contracts. Just proof it works. If this is relevant, reply yes and I’ll get your free after-hours call system ready. Strategy-wise: my plan is simple Once they reply “yes”, I’ll send a short personalized Loom showing why they need this system, then give them the p-number of the receptionist to test it itselfs Would love to know if this feels tighter and more aligned with what you suggested.

(Steal This Cold Message That Actually Got a Reply) 95% of DMs being sent right now? 💩 They read like a Fiverr VA copy-pasted it from a 2021 YouTube tutorial. You know the ones… ❌ “Hey [First Name], I help busy founders scale to 6-figures using my proven 3-step system…” ❌ “Quick question for you... 👀” ❌ “I saw your profile and thought we might be a great fit!” If you’ve ever sent one of those, this is your intervention. Because you’re not just being ignored—you’re being categorized. 🧠 As forgettable. 🗑️ As background noise. 📉 As someone not worth replying to. 🧠 How I Flipped It, just like @Jay Feldman teaches. Instead of ignoring a guy who’d been DM'ing me like an amnesiac AI… And this guy is a fairly well established influencer with a sizable IG YT & Skool Community. I sent this: Not gonna lie --> you’ve hit me with more “Hey Ian”s & "How's Biz?" than an MLM recruiter w/ amnesia 😂 Figured I’d wait to reply until I had something worth showing. In the last 3 months 56 new customers. $72,408 in revenue. 9 churned. {SCREENSHOT PROOF} All from a similar offer and audience size to yours. Not saying you're leaving money on the table... But if you are, your weak ass DM game is probably why. ✌️☮️ Guess what happens next? 👀 He replied instantly. Then booked a call. 🧨 Why It Worked ✅ Pattern interrupt – Casual. Funny. Not trying to sell. ✅ Leads with proof – No bait. Just data. ✅ Curiosity over pitch – Hints at the gap without bragging. ✅ Reverses the dynamic – He chased me. 💥 Want to Stop Getting Ghosted? Here’s the formula: Open with a jab – playful, honest, bold Drop results – numbers > adjectives Create curiosity – no neediness, just a window Position yourself as the shortcut – without pitching Shut up and let them ask Comment “SLAP” and get the DM Masterclass that’s booked me calls with people way outside my “lane.” No more spam. No more guessing. No more sounding like someone’s virtual assistant. 🧠 You’re either pattern-interrupting…

This is my first campaign. I got lead list from Apollo of UAE Real Estate Agencies with roles Owner, Director, CEO, CTO, Manager, and Founder. The headcount size is 51-200. Here's my copy: Subject: Delayed replies cost deals. Let’s fix. Hi {{firstName}} , Many agencies like {{companyName}} struggle to respond to leads faster, and it often means losing deals. Teams that reply within 5 minutes are 21x more likely to close deals compared to those that wait 30 minutes. That’s why top agencies are turning to AI Assistants to: - Reply faster - Recommend listings - Qualify leads with smart questions - Book appointments It’s a simple way to boost conversions without adding pressure to the team. Curious how it could work? Reply with AI ASSISTANT, and I’ll send over a complete plan. {{accountSignature}} --------------------------------------------- The problem is: I am getting 71% open rate but 0 reply rate. The first copy has been sent to 3000+ agencies. I wanna know if the problem is with the copy or the lead list? Thanks in advance.

Hey everyone! After getting amazing advice from @Max Khalus and other members of the community, including Jay, I've completely rewritten my cold email draft. Hey {{firstName}}, Was digging into {{companyName}} and something stood out. You’ve nailed acquisition but... What happens after someone buys for the first time? We’ve seen wellness brands struggle with retention not because of product quality. But because buyers didn’t fully understand how results happen. That reminded me of a system that Noorbru used to boost reorders by over 15 percent. It’s called the Educational Retention System. If this is something you’re seeing, happy to share how others have been tackling it this quarter. – Lucas

I will launch my first campaign targeting disaster damage restoration companies. I’ll offer them a free after-hours AI receptionist as a front-end offer to eliminate AI hesitation. Once they see the results, I’ll present a proposal for a full 24/7 AI receptionist. Subject line: Missed call {{First_name}}? {{First_name}} how are you handling after-hours emergency calls lately? Response often gets harder when conditions shift suddenly. Many restoration teams see demand spike during certain seasons while crews are already stretched thin. In markets with established competitors like {{Company_competitor}}, response time often makes the difference. If this feels relevant, reply yes and I’ll send something made specifically for your company. if any one have an advice just tell me.