3d • Copywriting ✍️
Cold email copy
Hey everyone! After getting amazing advice from and other members of the community, including Jay, I've completely rewritten my cold email draft.
Hey {{firstName}},
Was digging into {{companyName}} and something stood out.
You’ve nailed acquisition but...
What happens after someone buys for the first time?
We’ve seen wellness brands struggle with retention not because of product quality. But because buyers didn’t fully understand how results happen.
That reminded me of a system that Noorbru used to boost reorders by over 15 percent. It’s called the Educational Retention System.
If this is something you’re seeing, happy to share how others have been tackling it this quarter.
– Lucas
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Cold email copy
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