Need quick feedback on my cold email copy
Hey guys, I’m starting cold email this week and wanted to get some quick feedback before I start blasting. Here are the offers + the related copy, would really appreciate if someone experienced could take a quick look and tell me if I’m on the right track or if I should tweak anything. 1- PPC Report generation Hey {{firstName}}, Know this is out of left field, but I help marketing agencies like yours automate report creation. Just installed this automation at [competitor company name], and they’ve been able to cut 20+ hours of manual dashboard work. Basically, the system pulls data from all your ad accounts, automatically generates client-ready dashboards, and formats everything neatly — all with a single click. You down for a 15-30min talk this week? If yes but you want more info just lmk and I can record a loom to show you how it works. Thanks {{snedingAccountFirstName}} 2- SEO Offer (Content Creation for Clients): Hey {{firstName}}, Know this is out of left field, but I help SEO agencies like yours automate content creation for your clients. Just installed this automation at $100K+ agency in Calgary, and they’ve been able to cut 20+ hours of manual content work every week. Basically, the system crawls relevant sources, analyzes competitor content, and generates ready-to-use client content — blog posts, page copy, headlines, CTAs — all in one report for you to present to your clients. You down for a 15-30min talk this week? If yes but you want more info just lmk and I can record a Loom to show you how it works. Thanks, {{sendingAccountFirstName}} 3- Competitor Intelligence Reports: Hey {{firstName}}, Know this is out of left field, but I help marketing agencies like yours automate competitor research. Just installed this automation at $350K+ PPC agency in Calgary, and they’ve been able to cut 20+ hours of manual competitor analysis every week. Basically, the system runs competitor audits automatically, tracks their ads, keywords, content strategy, and generates comprehensive reports ready to share with clients — all in one neat dashboard.