5d (edited) • Copywriting ✍️
Cold email review
Heya! I've written a reverse lead magnet cold email. Was wondering if I can get some feedback:
Subject: heard of {{Lead Gen Jay - Find Competitor}}?
Hey {{Firstname}}, how familiar are you with {{Lead Gen Jay - Find Competitor}}?
Have you noticed how their emails always land in the inbox?
We audited brands that compete with {{Lead Gen Jay - Find Competitor}}. Most are losing 30-50 percent of their emails to the promotions tab. This means 30-50 percent of their abandoned cart revenue goes unseen.
Want me to run the same complementary deliverability audit for {{Companyname}}?
Best regards,
Lucas
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Cold email review
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