Alright fam — dropping this here for today’s Feedback Loop. I’m working on the pitch + marketing for our Container Homes and I want your honest feedback.
📄 Draft Post / Pitch
“Thinking about building a backyard rental or adding an affordable living space under 100k?
Perfect as a rental, guest suite, office, or starter ADU. Turnaround time is quick, setup is simple, and it gives your property instant extra value.”
Question for the group:
👉 Does this pitch grab you?
👉 What would make you more likely to message or click?
👉 What needs to be shorter, clearer, or stronger?
Drop your thoughts below — even a one-liner helps.
📌 Your Turn
Post ONE:
- Listing
- Social post
- Script
- DM
- Photo + caption
- Or anything you’re working on…
…and ask for feedback, too.
Then comment on at least 2 other posts to help someone else level up today.
Let’s keep sharpening each other’s content.