Thumbnail and Title Review Request · Creator Boost Tribe

Thumbnail and Title Review Request

I need some feedback on the thumbnail and title for my next video. I'm just not sure these will grab people's attention.

Title: Stop Blaming Yourself! It's Your Watercolor Paper (Competition Results)

Which thumbnail works better? Or do they need to be quite different from what they are now?

If you need more explanation, read on.

My intro says, "If your watercolor paintings disappoint you, stop blaming yourself. It's probably your paper. Imagine your watercolors flowing on the paper evenly without fussing! To learn how to do this, join me at the Watercolor Paper Playoffs, where we'll find the best performing watercolor paper for the money". Then the video switches to the stadium and MC's who are hosting the competition, which then shows the tests and scores till there is a winner. BTW, the watercolor paper tests are real, done by me. The competition is made up to try to cause tension for the viewer.

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