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Would you claim?

Hello everyone👋, I would love to hear what you think about this email.

Problem: GlowNest recieved 45,00 websites visitors every month,but only 1,8% complete a purchase. Analysis show that nearly 68% of shoppers add products to their cart but abandon the checkout process.

The purpose of email is to persuade a customer to return to their cart and complete their purchase.

From: GlowNest skincare

To: Janet( 25 year old who has sensitive skin and is interested in skincare products to help her improve her skincare)

Subject line: Claim what's yours with a just a click

Dear Janet

Skincare products are getting expensive but not this one.

Return to your cart and buy a Vitamin C Serum at an affordable price,which does not last long but I have kept one for you.

Glownest's Vitamin C Serum:

Rated 4.8/5 by over 3000 customers

One of the customer:" In just 28 days I noticed my skin was more smoother and toned."

This incredible Vitamin C serum made with 95% natural ingredients that are suitable for sensitive skin helps you:

•get bright and toned skin

•it reduce dullness and stubborn dark spots

•It hydrates and moisturizes your skin up to 24 hours

Janet I cannot promise that I'll the serum with me in the next 7days.

So before it's gone...return to your cart and buy it Today.

[Click here and Claim what is yours!]

If you buy the Vitamin C Serum you'll receive free shipping for orders placed within the next 24hrs and if you're not really satisfied with the serum, you'll get a 30-day money back guarantee!

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Would you claim?