This is my first Copy translation so feel free to critique It. I'd love to get as much feedback as i can and as many tips as possible so i can improve

I'm taking the Copywriter Starter Kick course, and I'm currently at the part where I have to choose a niche and I've chosen aesthetic clinics, What type of copywriting would be best for me to learn first for this niche?

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