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Offer critique

"Get a live offer within 10 days and start getting buyers within the next 7, done for you tech, copy and graphics. Plus 1 month of Facebook ad management as a bonus at no extra cost"

I'm thinking $1000 for this entire offer. If I am going to go low to get as many deals as possible I want to all the way and anything lower is too suspicious for that job board. Based on research.

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I wanted it to be a great offer that is hard to pass on.

This is the offer itself . I need to work out the unique mechanism and sales argument, I wanted a second opinion before I actually made the offer this time haha.

This will be posted to the nhb job board on facebook. So a mostly cold/some warm(right time right place kind of thing).

Yes, I can deliver on this because of AI. The graphics will be clean but basic and will communicated ahead of time in the dms. And I will show some sample graphics ahead of time; that I made for my own offer that I killed and am redoing.. You can check them out below. I used Claude design on the pro plan for them.

Once I make the full post I'll post that for critique too, I just need to do some more priority work first.

Thanks.

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Offer critique