Not sure why I wasn't thinking of my VSL script as copy that deserved its own review. Could I please get some feedback on it? Too much waffling/overexplaining? https://docs.google.com/document/d/146fuWMUtbPjVMJ4nRR7PanN4SGOzKXmk/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=104740346712176015696&rtpof=true&sd=true

Asalamu Alaikum @Nabeel Azeez The Google doc below explains the situation, context and copy. Thanks— https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dqNadHdt4SIhdjSREKQP6wSfJH3pGyPCXsHaubwVFFA/edit?usp=sharing

I updated the page based on the recommended Book-a-call format. My wife accidentally edited the footage in Instagram format and deleted the raw footage, so we'll just have to make do with the current video for a bit. Might fill the sides with some b-roll. Any other suggestions ya'll? https://clarity.moonieful.com/moonieview-cold

Here's the offer I shared earlier, but for cold traffic https://clarity.moonieful.com/moonieview-cold

My first attempt at Zhi Style Offer It is a low ticket digital product with traffic funneled from the FB ads. A more detailed description of the product is in the doc. Thank you UPDATE - improved it, saved in PDF with design so it is more visible, it was weird in text, comments are open. Not sure if it is acceptable https://drive.google.com/file/d/11oZToE1kbGmfe0tpY_j2_n12vrU3ObQK/view?usp=sharing