This is the second copy I wrote. I know that there would be unnecessary information or over education. There is language barrier as well. I might didn't comply with principals of persuasion as well in the copy. But I wrote this to get criticism from experts and get better. I need your guidance and advices! I'm thanking you in advance for your precious time and guidance. Here's the link to docs : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1DXhDjzsOtjBllNjAfSshfYULHJjqcO6APWBuLzIqudI/edit?usp=drivesdk

Learning is fun until it comes to execution. The fear of failure holds us back. Well, that's where I am right now. I'm learning how to write copy, but I'm scared to actually write a copy. Like what is happening???????

After spending some time fighting the fear of Copy Writing ( Actually, writing copy ). I just wrote a copy, whatever came to my mind, I wrote it onto copy. Before going to the actual copy, let me give you some context. PS: Yeah! I did get some help from AI ONE READER: Extra Large dog owners who want plenty of space so their dog can stretch, sprawl, and sleep comfortably without curling into awkward positions on tiny beds. STAGE OF AWARENESS: PROBLEM AWARE [ COPY ] [ HEADLINE TEXT: ] The ONLY large dog bed for large dogs to fully stretch out [ DESCRIPTION TEXT: ] Now 30% OFF [ BODY COPY: ] SUPER MASSIVE DOG BED for extra large dogs to fully stretch out – all four legs sprawled No more twisting into painful positions! No more hanging off the sides! With EHEYCIGA DOG BED FOR EXTRA LARGE DOGS, your 100+ pound dog can now, finally SLEEP in “superman” pose with front legs stretched out without hanging off the sides [ EXTRA SPACE ] They won’t just fit — get ton of extra space to fully stretch out, sprawl, and sleep however they want without twisting into awkward and painful positions just to squeeze those (in theory) “XL” beds [ EXTRA SUPPORT ] Your big baby will finally have plush, sturdy walls to rest that giant head on - no more drooping off onto the cold floor while trying to get comfy! [ EXTRA COMFORT ] Memory foam that "doesn't flatten even under 100+ lbs" - so your big baby can stretch out completely without "sinking to the middle" after just a month. No more finding them back on the floor because their bed gave up! Extra giant breeds always need something extra and we've provided the Extra! (not the cost) Trusted by 17,000+ big dog owners who were tired of fake 'XL' beds! Now 30% OFF! BUY NOW : EHEYCIGA DOG BED FOR EXTRA LARGE DOGS

I came to know about COPYWRITING very recently (actually, 2.5 weeks ago). I have bought and completed a course on COPYWRITING but that course didn't teach the actual grounds of persuasion, research etc Now, I'm doing market research for a product. Ok! Let's be real. It's a practice piece and I'm gonna share with you the real data. I was doing research for "Dog beds for extra large dogs" and I had an ideal reader persona in mind "Pet owners in search of a big bed for their big dogs to fully stretch their bodies while getting a comfortable sleep." But as I have completed my research, the top desires of the market I came across are "easy to clean bed, Bed with thick foams, large spacious beds, beds that last forever" As RULE OF ONE state that there should One Audience, One message, One Offer, One Action Should I write only about the top desire? Or Am I allowed to use top desires as benefits in the copy? How to know, who would be the one reader and what message will be the correct? I'm in so much confusion, anyone help me out I know it is a dumb question https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KLX1cb4dG38Nx-fTGPC1hCamsTZtsWuL72_ieY49fZ0/edit?usp=drivesdk

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