You've tried two different methods and got zero sales. Ouch. That must hurt. Don't worry, I've been there. I've written a few salesletters and had a lot of bumps. But I learned from that failure. And so can you. Here's what I think you need to do: - First, I think you need to find out if your offer is irresistible. Is your course solving a burning problem that your audience has? Is it unique and different from other courses out there? Is it clear and compelling? If not, you need to work on your offer until it's so good that people can't say no. - Second, you need to test your headline. Your headline is the most important part of your sales copy. It's what grabs attention and gets people to read more. You need to write at least 20 different headlines and test them with real prospects. See which one gets the most clicks, opens, and responses. Then use that headline for your launch. - Third, you need to build rapport and trust with your audience. You can't just ask them to buy from you right away. You need to warm them up first. You need to show them that you understand their pain, that you have the solution, and that you have proof that it works. You need to tell stories, use testimonials, and give value. You need to make them like you and trust you. If you do these three things, I can guarantee you'll see a huge difference in your results. But don't take my word for it. Try it yourself and see what happens. And if you need more help, well if be glad to check out your current email. Also just Wanna ask though what's your current CTR

😎

I've helped write webinar scripts and My favorite hooks to get people staying in their seat are: - A bold promise that solves a big problem or fulfills a big desire for the audience. - A shocking or surprising fact or statistic that grabs their attention and curiosity. - A compelling story that relates to the topic and builds rapport and trust with the audience. - A challenge or a quiz that engages the audience and makes them feel smart or curious. The Pitch The key here is to make the pitch a natural and logical extension of the teaching. You don't want to abruptly switch from giving value to asking for money. You want to make the audience feel like buying your offer is the next logical step in their journey. Finally, let me tell you what are my tried and true - can't forget this part of the pitch slides. These are the slides that summarize your offer, highlight its benefits and features, show its value and price, compare it with other alternatives, add bonuses and guarantees, create scarcity and urgency, and ask for the order. These are the slides that make your audience say "Wow! This is amazing! I need this now!" Here are some examples of what these slides look like: [slide 1] Introducing... The Ultimate Sales Letter Writing Course The only course you'll ever need to master the art and science of writing killer sales letters... [slide 2] What You'll Get Inside The Course - Over 10 hours of video lessons covering every aspect of sales letter writing - Over 50 real-life examples of successful sales letters from different niches and markets - Over.... [slide 3] The Benefits Of The Course By taking this course, you will: - Learn how to write sales letters that sell like crazy, no matter what product or service you're selling - Learn how to write sales letters that stand out from the crowd and grab your prospects' attention -Learn... [slide 4] The Value Of The Course If you were to hire me to write a sales letter for you, I would charge you at least $10,000. And that's a bargain, considering the results I can deliver.

@Sean Mize YUP what's up? 😉

I think it would be Be yourself; everyone else is already taken - - Oscar Wilde Super inspirational so far 🔥

@Mariah Coz yup a lot of people tagged @Sean Mize for inviting them. This group is super engaging. 🚀🚀