How can I improve this video? · Synthesizer School

How can I improve this video?

Hey everybody, so this was the first exercise video I made ever, and this is the niche I'll be in for a while now. But I was struggling a lot with trying to figure out how to write the script for this video, and I feel like there is a million things I could improve. I tried to implement some story telling for increasing retention but couldn't find spots to do it because I needed to show the exercises.

Any tips would be good. Also an idea I just had right now is to watch viral fitness videos and observe why those ones did well and implement some of the things in those videos into mine. What do you think?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UMYl8OW1NKY

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