Day 18 Copy Translation. 08/06/26 · Copywriting Launchpad

Ayanda Mathe

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Day 18 Copy Translation. 08/06/26

Email Swipe.💀

Emails.

The Email Bandit at it again.

Get it?

Long Analysis by the way.

>SL: Eat this and Drop Blood Sugar, Force 7lbs in 72 hours

Big ( It's promises you that you will lose 7lbs (3.175kgs) in 72 hrs by eating a specific thing and dropping your blood sugar. Thing is 72hrs is a short span of time to lose 72hrs, that's one reason why this promise is big. Secondly, the promise of a magic pill can help you lose weight. It's weird big because you saying one thing can give you big results.)

>The Self Improvement Genie

[Brand]

>You can't burn fat if...

New ( You want to know how could you not burn fat because that's information you don't know. And you probably heard alot of ways to burn fat)

>....your blood sugar is too high you can't burn fat but..

New ( New problem: high blood sugar is the thing that prevents you from buying fat)

>A single serving of this will lower your blood sugar and force your belly fat to release itself as if you were doing 55 minutes of exhausting exercise....

Big ( it's big because it's seem to good to be true to think just one single serving can lower your blood sugar. Not only that, but this single serving is equivalent in weight-lose power to a long "55 minutes of exhausting exercises" for belly fat lose.)

>In fact, regular folks are seeing a drop in inflammation

Safe ( By saying "regulars folks", it's addressing that objection that a specifc type of people, not you, can try the)

>and here's what experts think....

Safe ( Experts so people of authority in the field, you can trust them)

>By simply reducing levels of inflammation you set your visceral fat on fire forcing it to release itself from the fat cell. It's quite shocking actually and...

(The pharsing of this sentences makes losing fat sound very easy)

>If you've got atleast 20lbs to lose and suffer from any aches and pain, well...

(Adressing an objection, like 'what if I have to lose 20lbs to lose, or what if my body is in constant pain, should I take it?')

>...1 Serving (just one Dose) Forces BLOOD SUGAR LOWER and melts up to 7 pounds in 72 hours but...

Easy( Easy because you just required to take one dose, nothing more, nothing less)

Big ( Because this one dose can 'melt up to 7 pounds in 72 hrs')

>Remember, you don't need much...

( I'm not sure if I would say easy, but it's assuring the fact that it's not something that takes alot from you)

>Just one "dose" of this inflammation and blood sugar reducer.

>Check it out here..

(CTA)

>Drop Blood Sugar and Force 7 lbs in 72 hours (eat this)

(Continued big promise. I don't know what the 'eat this' does)

Here's to a Magical Life!

The Self-Improvement Genie

2ND ANALYSIS

>One Reader

Someone looking to lose belly within a short span of time

>One idea

Drop 7lbs by lowering blood sugar

>One Action

Click on 'Check it out here'

>One Core Emotion

Atomic actions. Big results.

> One captivating, compelling strory

>One Single, Desirable Beneft

Lose Belly Fat Fast.

PROSPECT CHECK

>Awareness Stage

Problem/Solution Aware,

Because the copy never actually mentions what exactly you should eat to get those results. That information was ommited. The copy tells you how you will lose belly fat, it explains.

>Sophistication

2nd Stage

The copy is a bigger promise. It promises that you will lose 7lbs in 7hrs. 2nd market sophistication stage is one a race on who can make the bigger promise until it's exhausted.

PROSPECT MIND (Emotional Core)

> Desires, what does the prospect want to be satisfied?

The prospect just wants to lose belly fat fast and honestly would be happy to find out that that's a possibility.

>What emotion is driving the copy?

Hope.

BELIEFS (Notions)

>What does the prospect already believe?

There couldn't possible something preventing their fat burn but hopefully they is.
High blood sugar is preventing fast fat burn
You need to be a certain type of person for this solution to work for you.

>Goal Belief

Drop blood sugar by using this unnamed product and you will burn belly fat fast.

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