I have not been able to show up in this wonderful community ... The reason ? My mother is getting cancer treatment. Since then I have been following her like a shadow. Words can't explain the pain . Don't feel to write more . I just think I am where I need to be . Somehow , I managed to sit down and hand copy one of David Ogilvy's Ads. Breakdown of this Ad is in Google docs . I took screenshots of the ad section wise, pasted in docs and broke it down accordingly. Here is the link : Ad breakdown . https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wuGn8Srzbywq2E5MowKTicGr1ixYI39ix0JGesssGOQ/edit?usp=drivesdk I think it will be helpful .

If you're not sure what to write, you might be hung up by thinking you have nothing to say. The truth is, you're full of interesting information and learning more all the time. Ever hear that phrase, "you learn something new every day?" I believe it's true. In fact, today, let's learn something and reteach it to someone else. First, visit your favorite website, blog, or social media site. (Yes, Facebook is encouraged for this writing prompt, just don't get distracted.) Once there, look for an article or blog post with more than a few paragraphs. Read the post and then – here’s where the writing comes in – explain, in your own words, what you read and learned. Feel free to add your own twists or examples to make your story unique. Note: This is not a reviewing post and you can now attach a file. Credit goes to AWAI

It's been a moment since I ran a QnA! We had some great questions last time, so we're doing another one! Drop your questions as comments and I'll answer them as I have time over the next week!

I said i'm bad at writing copy so this is just me practicing my writing. This is the start of my daily practice. I might just write these in a note book or write them here. I don't know yet. I mimicked one of the ads I analysed. Is that a good idea? Context: >Stage Of Awarness Problem/Solution Aware. >One Readers Pet Owners who are really worried what nutritions their cats are eating. >Perfect Nutrition SL: Worried About Your Cat's Nutrition? Dear Reader Take a look at these two cat images below? On the left, you will see what actually happens to your cat when she doesn't recieve her proper nutrition. Notice how brittle, thin, and VERY sparse your cat's coat is? Do you see her bones through her coat? That means her protein level intake is low. Look at her eyes. Notice how milky they eyes are. That's a sign of blindness. Meaning your cat is not getting enough taurine in her diet. Now, look at the cat on the right. Notice how fluffy and full her coat looks. Look at how clear and pure her eyes are... This is because of KibC perfect nutrition. KibC is a vet recommended brand, specificalizing in perfect nutrition. To never worry about your cats nutrition and ensure she's receiving the perfect nutrition. Click here. To Healthy Cats Pet Nutrition Specialist.

Email Swipe.💀 Emails. The Email Bandit at it again. Get it? Long Analysis by the way. >SL: Eat this and Drop Blood Sugar, Force 7lbs in 72 hours Big ( It's promises you that you will lose 7lbs (3.175kgs) in 72 hrs by eating a specific thing and dropping your blood sugar. Thing is 72hrs is a short span of time to lose 72hrs, that's one reason why this promise is big. Secondly, the promise of a magic pill can help you lose weight. It's weird big because you saying one thing can give you big results.) >The Self Improvement Genie [Brand] >You can't burn fat if... New ( You want to know how could you not burn fat because that's information you don't know. And you probably heard alot of ways to burn fat) >....your blood sugar is too high you can't burn fat but.. New ( New problem: high blood sugar is the thing that prevents you from buying fat) >A single serving of this will lower your blood sugar and force your belly fat to release itself as if you were doing 55 minutes of exhausting exercise.... Big ( it's big because it's seem to good to be true to think just one single serving can lower your blood sugar. Not only that, but this single serving is equivalent in weight-lose power to a long "55 minutes of exhausting exercises" for belly fat lose.) >In fact, regular folks are seeing a drop in inflammation Safe ( By saying "regulars folks", it's addressing that objection that a specifc type of people, not you, can try the) >and here's what experts think.... Safe ( Experts so people of authority in the field, you can trust them) >By simply reducing levels of inflammation you set your visceral fat on fire forcing it to release itself from the fat cell. It's quite shocking actually and... (The pharsing of this sentences makes losing fat sound very easy) >If you've got atleast 20lbs to lose and suffer from any aches and pain, well... (Adressing an objection, like 'what if I have to lose 20lbs to lose, or what if my body is in constant pain, should I take it?')