🔥 New Referrals Every Day! 🔥 Updated my about page after Day 2 of this Challenge. Would love feedback— specifically on the first line. Thoughts? Https://www.skool.com/unicornuniverse/about 👈 PS — if you want to meet other business connectors drop CONNECT in the comments and I’ll send a link to register for our connection event. 🙌

Hey everyone! 👋 I’m working on this post to share more widely about Raising Change Globally, and I’d really love your feedback before it goes out into the wild. Does it feel clear? Warm? Would you stop and read it? Anything you’d tweak? Thank you so much!

My community is still private. I am working on the about page and solidifying my offerings (both free an paid). I am positioning myself as a Mary Poppins for high achievers and my Skool as a Montessori-style community for professionals, entrepreneurs and tradesmen to find their creative edge. I would love some feedback. I could improve the clarity in my presentation of self. Prior to now, I've drawn in clients through recommendations as a side-business. I've never made consulting or community-guidance a full-time endeavor. I have not branded myself as such, and my public facing profiles are more personal and art-driven. I am extraordinarily skilled and experienced with such a dynamic and worldly background. I'd love to know if that comes through, and if the concept is exciting.

-- What Makes This Work? @Nick Nebelsky @Shannon Boyer Just created a new NotebookLM-generated breakdown called “Anatomy of a Thriller Opening.” Honestly, it did a solid job pulling out the tension mechanics and structure … but I want to hear from you'll. What do YOU think makes a thriller opening actually land? -- Is it the atmosphere? The first shock? The character hook? The pacing? If you watched the breakdown: - What did NotebookLM get right? - What did it miss? - And what parts should be emphasized more if we turn this into a video format for the channel? I want this to be a community-driven breakdown, so drop your thoughts below -- even one sentence helps. Let’s build the ultimate thriller-opening formula together. 🔥🎬

I could use feedback on my outcome promise statement for Unicorn Universe. Which of the following do you think is most likely to get people to click "Join NOW!" regardless of everything else on my about page? 1. Helping Business Connectors Grow & Monetize Their Network in 90-days or Less 2. Helping Connectors Make & Receive More Referrals in 90-days than they have in their Entire Life! 3. Helping Connectors Discover New Opportunities & Align With Purpose-driven Business Owners 4. Helping You Make Connections to Achieve Your Unbelievable Dreams 5. Get Warm, High-Intent Introductions to People Who Can Actually Grow Your Business 6. Grow your business through curated introductions, strategic partners, and a proven referral system designed to create revenue in your first 30–90 days. 7. Land 3–10 Warm-intro Calls in Your First 30 Days Please give me your top three in order of best first, like: 6, 1, 5 Your reason WHY would be even more magical! 🦄 Would love feedback or alternative suggestions too. BTW — all of these promise statements are true. If you want in, click here