Copywriting is never going to be dead.

@Nelson Dape Cold outreach is reaching out to strangers offering something.

@Hanna Hook Nope, i am a copywriter.

I am confused if it's a reel script or an email. SL isn't that strong and actually very confusing (i left comment there). saying 126 seconds makes is sound like you just typed any random numbers. converting it into minutes would be better. spend 2.5 hours to do research isn't that much. That's the standard time to do research so either increase that number or replace it with some other pain points. Now to talk about pain points, your pain points doesn't feel like pain point at all. Everyone does research manually or just hire someone to do it for them. LinkedIn → Twitter → Instagram → Google → random tabs… I'm not sure what's the use of this line in your script, if it shows the platform you researched then what's "random tabs?" Don't confuse your audience or they'll skip. You talked about automation but what's the name of that automation? The benefits you talked about for your automations feel too good to be true and when you make such a good statement, you need something to back it up. I'd say, this can written better. You need to add more pain points. your current pain points are at just surface level. you need something like testimonials, research or something else to back up your heavy claim.

i remember one of the email sent by @Nabeel Azeez in which he said there are two ways to sell. either create fomo or give hope. Often negative angle works more but sometime it feels unethical. You can uncover pain or just give them hope for the better future.