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Hey guys, I made this email for a company PawPrint Co. the whole idea is to sell a products/supplement for dogs who have joint problem. it was made just for practice. I would love to see your thoughts on this?☺️ SL: 3 RED FLAGS YOU NEED TO KNOW PV:The antidote for your pet’s well-being because we care 😊🐾 Hey /firstname/ I got one quick question for you? Does your pet experience: • Stiffness? • Lethargy? • Loss of appetite? • Swelling? Then I am sad to inform you that your dog might have a JOINT PROBLEM. Do you know that joint problems, especially “osteoarthritis,” are a major cause of pain and decreased quality of life for dogs? Dogs with joint issues often struggle to: • walk • stand • or lie down comfortably A dog in pain can pant constantly, lose its appetite, become restless, or have accidents in the house. Which obviously we at “PawPrint Co.” don’t want to happen. So, we have decided to bring a change with our brand new supplement with a 4.8 ⭐️ rating and 2000+ reviews globally. Why is this supplement good for your pet? Because it contains: glucosamine, chondroitin, turmeric. All ingredients which are proven scientifically to cure your dog’s “joint problem” 🐾❤️ Also, we have a special 60-day money-back guarantee offer only for you. So take quick action because the sale is ending soon… for we care about your lil one and their health. /Link/ Team PawPrint Co
1 like • 20d
Your email is really Good, only need some improvement Headlines is okay, but your PV need to do short. In just my opinion Hook is good, don't use some formal or profession word like "inform". You didn't mention benefits properly of glucosamine, chondrotin and turmeric because most people have no knowledge about this. And try to use I/you not we/our. That's all, I can
1 like • 20d
Keep doing like this way. I will waiting for your next email.
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SL: welcome to LegacyX FBA PV: there's something for you Hey, Alex Welcome to LegacyX FBA. I'm glad that you joined LegacyX. I started LegacyX FBA to solve people's problems related to Amazon FBA and don't know how to start Ecom Business. And why? because in my days, when I was alone and didn't know where to start. And wondered How can I find the best product which boosts my conversion? That’s why I created and want to believe that you can too. For now Click this and watch whole video --- link Because over the next few weeks I will provide you, some valuable Lessons and many things you still don't know that will help you to be able to understand how the Amazon FBA works. Thank you for joining me on this journey and I look forward to hearing your story. Talk soon, Kevin kunze LegacyX FBA
0 likes • Dec '25
@Theo Le Prince Roger! Brother
0 likes • Dec '25
@Ayaz Sayyed
Kindly review this email.
SL1: Your life as a band 9 student SL2: Confessions of a band 9 student SL3: Are you a band 9 student? Picture this. You recently gave your IELTS exam and your results are out. You got band 9 score. What now? Does it really transform your life as they say? Here’s what typically happens after you get a band 9 (as told by previous students who were just like you) You see your band 9 result and immediately, your mouth gets filled with the sweetest taste known to man. The taste of success. The feeling of getting such amazing results lasts for days and even weeks. It is everlasting. You enjoy while others attend the same boring classes for hours. No tiresome practice sessions. Your anxiety and fear have come to an end unlike some of your fellows who failed. Your parents are really happy. They’re truly proud of you. They know that they raised a competent son. They will have the most peaceful sleep tonight. They invested thousands of dollars on your education. They can finally expect a return now. Mom and Dad are extremely happy because they know your future is now secure as well as theirs. You’ll finally be able to give them a better life. You applied for a few programs and got admission in your preferred university. The campus is amazing and you made a lot of cool international friends. You love the city too. The night life is amazing and you’re exploring new places every day. You also perform extremely well in studies. No problem at all in understanding the teachers and lectures. The listening and reading practice sessions you had are coming in handy. Your grades… top of the class. Impressed by your grades, the professor offers you a work study arrangement. Now you’re making money while studying. As you build work experience, you’ll easily get a well-paying job after you graduate. Your life’s sorted out. All because of one exam. This is NOT a dream. Not just a fantasy. This is the reality for 100,000+ students we have coached during the past 15+ years. Students have been able to achieve 7, 8 and 9 bands on their first attempt with us. Some students were stuck at 5.5 band and failed their test multiple times.
1 like • Dec '25
Break the sentences like this 1st line short 2nd line maybe 2 or 3 line Then 3rd 1 or 2 line If you keep 3 or 4 lines together then it becomes boring for reader.
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Normal welcome email SL : Welcome, Kevin, here's what next… PV : I made my promise Thank you for joining the elite sales. I'm glad you took your first step to overcome your sales problem. By the way, go and take your gift what I promised to you Here's your pain relief ________________________ And make sure, you stay tuned that I can fill you with a lot of lessons that I learned from my experience. Where you get sometimes boosting sales tips, great stories of me and my clients, lots of problems you don't know what you holding back and even more. And, one more thing, feel free to unsubscribe if it seems you don't get the value of what type you expect. Saviour The elite sales
1 like • Dec '25
@Grace Gire thanks for your review
0 likes • Dec '25
@Qazi Uzair Thank you for you took some time to review my email.
Difficulty in email sequence
Anyone can tell me how welcome, nurtures, and promo email sequence work? What type of email should i write next after introduction Story of owner/product or value email? And nurture, promo sequence flow? Tell me
0 likes • Dec '25
@Jeevan Bg and where I can get ?
1 like • Dec '25
@Justin Villanueva thanks brother
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Hello everyone, I'm here to learn copyrwritng and I want to become a great copyrwriter whose every copy make Thousands of dollars.

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