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I appreciate the meter, I believe it helps communicate things in the way you might say them, rather than the reader filling that part in. Many parts of this remind me of my past and/or worldview. I dont know which native American story the intro came from but I know it was one, the characters are familiar and I have studied that mythos. At times I had to take a break because the story of what happened to the natives is so horrible and ugly that I couldn't stand it. My partner's grandma walked the Trail of Tears. The disenchantment, the striving for a change of scenery and answers. I used to leave the library with a book stack as tall as I could carry, and I probably angered a few librarians due to eating cheetos while reading lol There was an orchid tree in my back yard and if I was anywhere, I had climbed it and was reading a book among the boughs. Climbing a tree and playing in the ocean are some of my favorite memories. My first car was a vw bug. It was really hard to learn to drive but i wanted it so badly I muddled through it :)

[Life Mind] Finding the Way is unclear - this is an observation and not a critique. At the moment I'm thinking of this "book" as an emergent entity - ideas and concepts swirling around imaginal cells to create an elegant story with shimmering wings. I have more to add to this story - personal influences and constraints - is this the place to do so? how deep do i go here?

I just posted the first three chapters into Part 1 Life Mind! I hope you like. The idea is that you'll read a chapter and then post--where do you see yourself in this story?

Hello, I just joined.. I was wondering where I could find a copy of your book? Thank you