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I appreciate the meter, I believe it helps communicate things in the way you might say them, rather than the reader filling that part in.
Many parts of this remind me of my past and/or worldview. I dont know which native American story the intro came from but I know it was one, the characters are familiar and I have studied that mythos. At times I had to take a break because the story of what happened to the natives is so horrible and ugly that I couldn't stand it. My partner's grandma walked the Trail of Tears.
The disenchantment, the striving for a change of scenery and answers. I used to leave the library with a book stack as tall as I could carry, and I probably angered a few librarians due to eating cheetos while reading lol
There was an orchid tree in my back yard and if I was anywhere, I had climbed it and was reading a book among the boughs. Climbing a tree and playing in the ocean are some of my favorite memories.
My first car was a vw bug. It was really hard to learn to drive but i wanted it so badly I muddled through it :)
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