Please tear apart my Sales page · Synthesizer School

Dec '23 in Other

Please tear apart my Sales page

Hi Friends

First of all, I am not here to sell you anything.

I launched my own sales page and would highly appreciate some advice on the copy and text I have written and improve it wherever I can.

I want to build a highly converting page to retire my mother.

I would love to receive some feedback on my sales page, especially on the text.

Thanks a lot in advance, I would be extremely grateful for advice!

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