I just sent my first cold pitch - advice?

26d ago (edited) in Money💰

So here's the cold pitch, if it could be improved in some way or shape or form I would appreciate it. Just a fair warning, I re-read it and it was pretty damn cheesy, but any feedback would be appreciated :)

Also the hyperlinks are things I mentioned in the email, so that's why there is a preview of one of my videos.

Hey Morgan,

I found your channel recently & watched your video on you gaining weight again and loved video the authenticity that you showed.

I thought it was very brave to be real about the fluctuation that honestly a lot of people have whenever they try to loose weight.

Also in your video on different phases of fitness journey’s, not looking at the scale was a good one.

Ok ok, I know your not all about weight loss, but also about wellness as well, and enjoying the gym more.

Which is nice since a fair amount of fitness guru’s out there aren’t like that.

But I only noticed a slight(but can be big) problem.

And that there was no products girl! (ok don’t hate me)

Now, I saw the affiliate stuff, but what if there was more potential, like making a wellness weight loss product?(or did I miss it?)

Ok, so the reason I’m sending this email is because I’m a virtual assistant(VA) for fitness & health YouTubers, and I would like to see if there’s anything I could help out with.

The things I can do are:

Helping make products & managing products(which I noticed was the biggest problem)
Take time off tasks they don’t want to do. For example, responding to emails like this, reaching out to brands(if that’s how you jam).
Helping make thumbnails for videos, or doing short form editing.

Ok, well why me though?

Why should you even consider me to help take time off your day, make products to make more money, and to help make thumbnails or do short form editing for you?

I’ve made a paid product, which I can take that experience and help you make a product that would align with your brand and mission.

And I believe with the other services I offer, it not only takes time off your daily to do list to have more time to put into videos, but also save you mental anguish for things you hate & don’t want to do.

Ok, I know that was a lot of reading, and I imagine you’re busy, so if you don’t want to respond because you’re busy I understand(I’ll only be a little offended).

Best,

Gabe.

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