! Welcome to the secret collab!) and are ready to get some feedback on it!
It started with a melody I sent him (I think both of us were expecting a darker vibe with his cinematic trap lane and my dark pop lane but this is just what came out 😅) Then he built the arrangement, I went in and wrote lyrics and recorded vocals, and then he mixed them.
Some specific questions we have:
Any specific feedback to improve the vocal mix?
Likewise any feedback on the arrangement of the beat?
What points in this song could there be more “moments” to help it build as the song goes on?