I tell everyone; I’ve said it once, I’ve said it 100 times, and I’ll keep saying it forever.
Read what you write, THEN, re-read it out loud. Say the words you have written as though you are reading your story to another person. I guarantee you will be shocked with what you hear, and the immediate improvements you can make. I don’t know why it works, but it always does 🤷♂️
So get reading out loud and see what you think? 📖