[Poll] Need help with this sell it in a sentence

I'm working on an auction.

Where I will share how I'm acquiring subreddits for free.

But that's not benefit-driven enough.

So I wrote:

"Get free traffic on demand by taking over niche Reddit communities using a Reddit-approved process."

Now I have built a tool to help me write and optimize these sentences.

I ran my sentence through that and got back:

“Get free, targeted traffic on demand by taking over niche Reddit communities with a simple, Reddit-approved process.”

I have attached his argument to this post.

Now I need your help to decide which one I should go with.

Get free traffic on demand by taking over niche Reddit communities using a Reddit-approved process.

Get free, targeted traffic on demand by taking over niche Reddit communities with a simple, Reddit-approved process.

Something else (Tell me in comments)

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