Jul '25 • Copywriting ✍️
Copywriting feedback?
I have to admit, I'm nervous about sending my first campaign!
I realize this is a big ask, but I would LOVE any feedback from anyone with experience. I've gone through the cold email masterclass 3 times and generated 7 different versions for my first reach out. I'll put my best two in the comments for review.
My ICP:
Roofers with a small to medium sized company
Pain: they miss out on jobs because they don't have an automated follow-up system
I spam-checked these and plan on using Spintax but here's what I have so far.
Thanks in advance!
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