I've always admired Mariah because she can tell stories with images on ppt slides :-)
And then create beautiful sales pages that draw you in like bees to spring flowers.
But my mind is so logical . . . and straight-line . . . and for years I sold with just words, print words on an old html page.
Now I use google docs . . . we sell $1k - $3997 with a one page google doc + a SamCart order form.
So to all you left brain writers out there who struggle with design:
If I'm allowed to do this here (Mariah let me know if I'm out of line) . . . I'm copying my Google Doc Sales Outline Below:
***Sales Letter Outline
***Headline: How ______ Can do ______ and get (Result) Without (problems in solving it other ways)
***Sub - headline: The big benefit the solution provides
Start with the pain of the prospect
3 questions:
- Are you struggling with . . .
- Are you frustrated because . . . .
- Are you frankly speaking, angry because it’s not working for you?
- Are you tired of spinning your wheels?
I understand . . I’ve been there . . . if that’s the case for you . . . listen carefully because . . . I am going to tell you what worked for me (what worked for my clients)
(optional) Who this is for: By the way, this is for coaches and consultants who want to increase their reach
By the way, this is for middle managers who are tired of being passed over for raises and promotions by new green kids out of college
By the way, this is for Dads who struggle to get rid of their beer belly (even if it’s not beer, it’s chocolate candy)
Paragraph section for this:
Paragraph Section for this:
→ Core Concept
This is essentially your Foundational Premise - How you are different, why your method works and others don’t
→ Here’s a model:
You can (something they can do with another system) and get (a result)
However (there is a problem) because of (reason)
We are the best at solving this for this reason:
→ Enter you -
(paragraph section)
Your background story - as it applies to the problem at hand
Your struggle (their struggle as well)
AKA - the background
How you discovered the solution
Why it’s different
Why you are motivated to share the solution with them
→ A deep dive into the solution
Through the sales letter, you must:
Break old beliefs
Show new picture
Install new beliefs
The new beliefs lead to working with you
What does the prospect need to belief such that once they believe it, the next logical and natural step is to work with you?
Throughout the sales letter, deal with these
Summarize everything,
So as you can see, all you need to do is (insert point a) (insert point b) (insert point c) and you can achieve (desired state based on the headline)
→ Introduce options:
Options 1: (do it on your own, go to a competitor, etc) however
- (insert problem with alternative 1)
- (insert problem with alternative 2)
- (insert problem with alternative 3)
Or you can use (your solution) and get (this result that is faster, better, cheaper)
→ Reaffirm who this is for:
This is for (niche person) who needs (solution) but is struggling with (problem)
You feel
You are in this situation:
→ Insert benefits:
→ Here’s what’s going to happen when you work with us:
- You will be able to (outcome) in (timeframe)
- ou can even (outcome) (better than before)
- You can finally get rid of (negative result)
- You can forget about (negative result)
- You will feel (positive emotion) because of (result)
→ Features/How it Works
→ Use this pattern:
Before, when you wanted to ____, you had to _____
but now you can (new way) (to achieve outcome) without negative impact of (old way)
Do you you see how easy that is?
Before, when you wanted to ____, you had to _____
but now you can (new way) (to achieve outcome) without negative impact of (old way)
Do you see how easy that is?
Before, when you wanted to ____, you had to _____
but now you can (new way) (to achieve outcome) without negative impact of (old way)
Do you see how easy that is?
Repeat as many times as is necessary
Build the Dream
Build up the emotional impact of taking action . . .
This might look like:
Imagine how it would feel to _________
What would it mean for you if?_______
How many other people would be positively affected if you ???_____
. . . .a few more . . .
The bottom line that you’ll feel amazing, this will radically change your life for the better, even your family and friends will notice . . .
→ Price:
Now if you wanted to (get this outcome) before, it cost you (high cost of the old way)
We are only 1/10th of the price for 10x the benefit
(alternative: Notwithstanding the cost of cobbling together a whole bunch of other solutions to get the result you get with me in a short 6 week period, you are going to get EVERYTHING you need to
(outcome) all under one roof, organized so you can check each item off as you go, and it’s only $2000.
All you need to do is:
Action:
- Book a call
- Send a text
- Take the trial
- Sign up here
→ Warning:
We can only offer (limited time or quantity) because (reason) so be sure you act now (or negative response)
→ Bonuses:
Now because you are (reading this letter, watching this video) we are going to do something extra special)
→ Bonus example:
- Coaching time
- Additional access
- More training
- Bonus access
- Guarantee
→ So let’s summarize this offer:
You get:
- Bonus
- Warning
- Guarantee
- All you need to do is (insert call to action)
→ Q and A:
The buying is done in the Q and A
Over time, as you discover what stops people from buying your service, add to the Q and A
Listen to your customers and find out what objections they have, then answer them like this:
That’s a great questions, many clients have asked that before, this is what works for them
- Will it work for me?
- Can I afford it?
- Do I have the time?
- Do I trust you?
Example:
Now some of you may be asking, will it work for me in my country?
Well, (insert answer)
Will this work (condition)?
Well, (answer)
P.S. go ahead and get started: (cta)
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folks, I hope this is super - helpful to you!😀