Day 16 Copy Translation. 06/06/26 · Copywriting Launchpad

Ayanda Mathe

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Day 16 Copy Translation. 06/06/26

An email. Okay, I got to start analysing other types of copy.

SL: Cashews

>The Self Improvement Genie.

[Business Name]

>A slow thyroid can force fat gain...

New ( New and relevant because you probably didn't know a slow thyroid can force fat gain, or that your fat gain was caused by a slow thryoid.)

>ESPECIALLY around the tummy.

Specific ( Especially around the tummy, so a specific area on your body, that you also probably noticed fat gain.)

>Because your thyroid is your "metabolic gas pedal".

Useful ( very informative right now, you didn't think of your thyroid as a metabolic gas pedal, so this imagery helps you understand better.)

>So, when it slows , like It's slamming on your "metabolic breaks".

>The solution? Eat thyroid-HEALING foods.

New, Hopeful ( You are given an actually solution to your fat gain so that's new to you, one, but also it gives you hope that you can combat tummy fat gain.)

>That'll speed UP your metabolism.

Big ( Big because it promises that these thyroid healing food will speed UP your metabolism which you don't know how true that could be. But you wishing it could be true. So it's big because it needs belief)

>AND flatten your belly.

Big ( The promise once more)

>So what thyroid-healing foods should you eat to get a flat belly?

>Find out here:

CTA

==> Discover what to eat (and what to avoid) to boost thyroid and burn belly fat faster.

>Here's to a magical life.

The Self-Improvement Genie

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