Skip Black Friday Deal… Roast My About Page Instead 🔥

Hey friends, Jen here.

Everyone is dropping Black Friday deals and “join my community” posts, so let’s do something different. Instead of another promo, I want your honest eyes on my Skool About page for Savvy Entrepreneurs.

I’m a 3rd generation woman entrepreneur, wife, homeschool mom, speaker and author, and together with my mom we help entrepreneurs with life integration and business. That’s the heart. Now I want to know if my About page actually says that clearly enough to make you want to join.

Here’s the game:

• Step 1: Click my About page: Savvy Entrepreneurs

• Step 2: Roast it lovingly in the comments here. Tell me what’s confusing, boring, too vague, or where you’d bounce.

• Step 3: Share one specific line, hook, or angle you would use instead.

I’m looking for real feedback, nso copywriters, community builders and straight-shooting entrepreneurs, have at it. Once the roasting is done, I’ll share the “before and after” and shout out the people whose ideas I use.

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