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I was sitting and waiting on a perscription when this opening came to me:
"I sold my right arm for a million dollars and lost all the money within an hour. Why do things like this keep happening to me?"
These kind of shocker value openings are priceless, in my oppinion. I feel like writing a book around it. It would probably be a sci fi or futuristic fiction.
What do you think? Is it a show stopper opening?