Review my Bullets please!
Hi, for practice, I wrote some bullets.
The brand offers a traction spray for better grip for athletes (https://edgespray.com/)
Here's what I wrote:
  • More movement. More speed. More wins.  
  • Never exit the game with a “grip excuse.” Spray 2-3 times per shoe, and you're never leaving the court unguarded UNTIL the final whistle! 
  • Ditch moisturizers, traction mats, and wet towels! (This traction spray works FLASH-LEVEL fast, giving you instant traction in LESS than a minute.)
  • Dries instantly, even before your feet hit the ground.
  • No more scraping off your soles to remove residue buildup or stickiness! Our sole grip spray is a non-toxic formula that’s easy on your soles and keeps you game-ready.
  • More grip, fewer slips! Athletes who use our spray say, “They do not skid or fall like they used to."
  • Serious athlete? Our traction spray is trusted by the world’s most renowned athletes, including USA Olympian Nick Itkin, volleyball player Dane Hillis, Jordan Kilgaon (the World’s No. 1 Pro Dunker), and many more. You, too, deserve the best for your gameplay.
  • Get a 25% better grip and movement—no matter what you wear. From Nike Kyries to basic budget trainers, our scientists have tested the EDGE traction spray on 15+ different sneakers and 10+ indoor gaming courts. The result is only better control and agility. 
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