I think my copy is pretty good. I'm probably wrong lol. Drop your harshest feedback below. Line by line, word by word, I don't care. If something sounds salesy, weak, or cringe, call it out. "Hi Valerie, Searched "exterminator Chandler" on Maps this morning. Simply Green Pest Control is in the top 3. Arizona Termite & Pest Solutions isn't. That gap is costing you calls every week. Most people pick from the top 3 and never scroll further. I mapped out what it would take for Arizona Termite & Pest Solutions to start showing up ahead of Simply Green Pest Control in Chandler. Shows exactly where the gap is and what to fix first. Does it make sense for me to send it over?" ​ (Bonus points if you rewrite the part you hated)

Im targeting small service based business owners like plumbers hvac etc. 60% of the emails are like "admin@..." or "info@..." What kind of copy do we send them when we cant mention the name. Do we ask the email to be forwarded to the email? whats the move

I watched all of Jay's videos. A month's warmup, spintax, spam check, dmarc spf dkim, M-verifier, no tracking link. basically exact setup as the 7hr video. The only problem is that we sell White Label Marketing services and we have to target the most hammered list of ALL TIME: "Emp: 1-20, Marketing Agency owners/founders" Here are 4 campaigns im running: 1) Subject: Can you also do...? Body: "Hi Jamie, Clients are expecting agencies to handle everything, from SEO to PPC to Near Me to Ads to AI. They don't want multiple agencies. They want "One throat to choke!". If we could sneakily do the delivery under your brand for any customer needs, might that be of interest?? We’re the white-label backend for 3,000+ agencies, primarily smaller teams looking to grow their offerings without a large fulfillment team. If it’s useful, I can send a quick snapshot of our wholesale ranges on the services you already provide so you can line them up against what you’re currently paying out. Sincerely, Addison H. Partnerships @ Umbrella US" 2) Subject: Possible monthly add-on? Hi Rachael, What if we could help Eyecon Graphics in providing an AI voice agent (under your brand) that answers the missed cals that typically go unreturned by SMBs, often around 40 percent, so your clients book additional jobs and acquire additonal prospects, would that be interesting? The model is a standard reseller setup: you bill the client, we bill you. You keep from the margin. If you’d like to have a live demonstration, I can provide a demo number you can dial and test. Warm Regards, Addison H. Partnerships @ Umbrella US 3)Getting your clients into ChatGPT and Gemini’s answers Hey Stacey, If we could help Max Media help your clients show up inside tools like ChatGPT and Gemini when people search things like “best Dentist in Aberdeen”, not just in Google, would that be interesting? As the white-label backend powering over 3,000 agencies, we've developed what is essentially the next stage of SEO: ensuring local businesses are the top brand recommended by AI.

Hi Guys, We are B2B Business (Manufacture), I think the "carrot" offer that we've got is our Catalog (or White paper). Should I send cold email with attached file or not? and Why? Please let me know fam!

is Apollo’s email/phone enrichment worth the credits? Or are you guys enriching elsewhere after scraping?