6d • Copywriting ✍️
ROAST SESSION - Don't Hold Back
I think my copy is pretty good.
I'm probably wrong lol.
Drop your harshest feedback below. Line by line, word by word, I don't care. If something sounds salesy, weak, or cringe, call it out.
"Hi Valerie,
Searched "exterminator Chandler" on Maps this morning. Simply Green Pest Control is in the top 3. Arizona Termite & Pest Solutions isn't.
That gap is costing you calls every week. Most people pick from the top 3 and never scroll further.
I mapped out what it would take for Arizona Termite & Pest Solutions to start showing up ahead of Simply Green Pest Control in Chandler. Shows exactly where the gap is and what to fix first.
Does it make sense for me to send it over?"
(Bonus points if you rewrite the part you hated)
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ROAST SESSION - Don't Hold Back
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