I think the funny pink shapes draw too much attention to the shape rather than the message you're trying to show. I would do simple rectangular shapes. I'd also recommend an easier to read font. Also, are those features explained elsewhere on the page? If not, they may need some description. I'm not sure what decaudit is, nor what 1-2-1 coaching means. Also, what are unlockable templates? You'll have to make those things clear. I think it's a great start, I love those comparison things when I'm making decisions. I think a little more clarity and tweaking will make it great!

@Gus Gray Glad if it helped!

I love the idea! I've written some historical fiction but so far haven't published it. The only thing I'd change, from a brief look, it adding more slides with bullet points about what you do/get in the community!

@Zena Ryder People tend to look at pictures more than read a long description, which is why I suggested adding more slides. Your description is good!

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster Thanks for the tip!

This is a nice start! I love what you have written, but I'd suggest adding a lot more slides as people will be quicker to look at that than to read your description. You can incorporate parts of your description as bullet points on a slide or two. Also, I see you have a nice amount of members - any testimonials you could add to a slide?

I think it's pretty good. I was a little confused by the Forbes slide, what is that all about? And the next one is cut off. Those are the biggest things I noticed!