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I’m on page 6 of school in music and decided to look at other music groups on the first five pages. Mine looks like a child made it. Can you help I want to be on the first page of school in music category and I need to be roasted! 🍠 🔥 https://www.skool.com/the-singing-circle

It's a new one I just added because it's needed. But honestly, I am not sure if this works well... What do you think?

In my community classroom, I offer a free (open to everyone, even non-members) daily business cartoon. Check it out, and then come back often to get a daily dose of humor.