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A community for readers who love historical fiction and are curious about the real history behind their favourite historical novels.
25 contributions to Roast & Promote ๐ฅ๐ข
Aug 11 โขย
Roast my opening line
โMost marketing advice becomes much more useful once you remove the bits that sound clever but donโt tell you what to do on Tuesday.โ I like the idea. Iโm less sure whether it lands quickly enough. What would make you stop and read the next sentence? Be kind-ish. I did join a roast group voluntarily, so I accept my fate. ๐ฅ
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2 likes โข 27d
I've literally heard the "Tuesday" bit (that specific day, too!) multiple times recently. I don't know whether it came from your brain, which happens to be tuned to the zeitgeist, or whether everyone's getting it from AI but, either way, it's currently over-used (at least from where I'm standing). I think your point is that marketing advice needs to be practical and actionable, not just theoretical. If I were you, I'd say that more directly (with less "cleverness"). Good luck and well done for being brave and putting your thoughts out there for roasting!
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2 likes โข May 13
Both of them are fine. I like how your personality comes across (you've got the personal brand down! ๐) BUT the lack of sync between video and sound really bothers me, but maybe that's just me! Also the graphic with the retention rate etc. is a bit confusing to the brain on first look because you have the higher percentage lower on the chart. I know they're not measuring the same thing and it's not really a chart.. but it nevertheless caused a brain glitch for me. With the testimonial, I wanted to have time to read it, but it went off screen before I could. Hope that helps!
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1 like โข May 13
@Lion Fludd
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May 11 โขย
Roast my Landing Page
Hi All. I created a landing page for our monthly Accelerator events, and I would love to hear what you think of it. This is the link: https://laurapaulina.com/skool-accelerator-event
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3 likes โข May 13
@Laura Paulina In my opinion, what you have now is MUCH better!
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3 likes โข May 13
@Laura Paulina You're welcome. I'm so glad it was helpful!
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Apr 3 โขย
Please roast my homepage
I'd love to know if it's clear from my homepage what I offer my clients. Do you think I need more detail on the homepage? Also, do I do a good enough job of building trust? https://zenafreelancewriter.com/ Thanks in advance!
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2 likes โข Apr 25
@Joe Sargent Thanks for you feedback! I appreciate it!
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0 likes โข Apr 26
@Elliott Robertson Thanks so much for your feedback!
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Apr 13 โขย
๐ฐ Do you control your spending? RoW#8
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Congrats @Dr. Severine Bryan
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@zena-ryder-6450
๐ Owner of the Historical Fiction Club. Copywriter & content marketing strategist for solo consultants & B2B service providers
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