@Dr. Severine Bryan thanks 😊

@Simon Nelson Thanks for the feedback!

The pink blobbiness kinda appeals to me somehow, but I can see how it would put some people off. If it attracts the right people, and repels the wrong ones, that's great. However, I don't know what 'decaudit' means. Also, I'm a Brit (living in North America) so I know what 'fortnightly' means, but I don't think every American and Canadian would. (I don't know about other English-speaking countries.) Again, it depends on your audience. If they're mostly Brits, then no problem.

@Gus Gray Sometimes, people say 'biweekly' but I think that's ambiguous between twice a week and once every two weeks. The clearest would be 'every two weeks' but that's long. "Fortnightly" is such a useful word!

Hi @Lion Fludd, here's some feedback... Main Image (video still): “Brand like a boss” and photo looks great. Very professional and a distinct vibe. I’m not much of a video watcher (prefer to read) and the videos were too long for me I don’t understand the second image. You need to change the size of the 3rd image. Also, are those three problems really what people complain about? Are you helping with the tech? Or more with the confidence side of things? I find myself a bit confused at this point… The top right image conflicts with the main image a bit. The little cartoon is a totally different vibe. The description over on the right. Yes, people need to be more trusted but it strikes me as a bit vague. Same goes for “this is where that begins”. Who is your community for and what is the result they’ll get, with as much specificity as you can manage in a few words? About section: The headline strikes me as a bit vague. It’s the sort of promise everyone makes. Your second sentence, however, that’s cool! We’ve got the outcome and how you’re going to help people get there. The bullet points seem fine to me, but I don't know your audience. You need a CTA at the end. Overall, I'd say there's some lack of clarity over what you're trying to do. Boost on-screen confidence? Or help with the tech side of things? Those are two different things. Also, what's your experience or authority? I think I need some of that in the About section. Hope this helps a bit!

Hi, I love the idea of this community! I run a writing group where we give one another feedback on our work, and it's so valuable. Honest feedback, respectfully given, is priceless. I'm a freelance writer, historical fiction author, and avid reader. Just dipping my toes in creating a Skool community. Looking forward to giving and receiving some roasting in here!