You had mentioned a book Mr Stem..

In our one on one you mentioned a book about writers that fall in love with their work so they feel they have to 'put it in' the script.

I don't recall off the top of my head what book it was.

I just cut about 4/5ths of my story/script writers act vi. for my movie.

The work she did? gorgeous.

Like you say in the MIB movie: sometimes you just have to write the words out.

And THEN fashion it for the work that people see.

Thanks. For giving me the reassurance that I've done the right thing.

Sincerely, Jason

PS It's looking like 150 or so shots plus that in the two battle sequences.

35 to 70 minute movie.

or an average of 7 seconds per shot.

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