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Super Bowl Predictions and lessons from The Goat, TB12... and how it applies to yours truly.
Love the idea of the Pats starting yet another much-hated dynasty. But also love me some Sam Darnold come back story. So I'll be good however this game goes. Predictions: Pats. Crucial mistake cost Darnold in the 4th Quarter. Situational football rules the day. But... this takes me back to The Goat, TB12. And the horrible start vs Atlanta, years ago. They fell behind 28-3, before storming back and winning in overtime. And maybe nothing looked worse than when Brady threw a pick 6 when they were down 14, to let the score go to 21-0. But he gathered himself and his team. "Come on now, laser focus! We gotta play harder! Tougher!" And led the greatest comeback in sports history. I've often felt this way when battling a script. Trying to figure out the way forward. Feeling lost, but knowing it's not in my DNA to give up and being determined to fight my way through. I genuinely look to Brady as a model for that. Selected 199th in the draft. 4th quarterback on the roster, behind the first QB ever to sign a $100M contract. But showing up everyday in practice and staying late, with the mentality that this would be his team one day and his work ethic would make that inevitable. I'm curious, who's your model for the way you work, for how you move forward when things get tough? Oh, and what's your pick? I'm going 27-24 Pats. Vrabel's got this team dialed in. I could be wrong, but even if I am, with the mentality Brady set down for that organization, even a loss will be a learning experience on their way back to greatness IMHO. Then again, I'm the same guy who was at a huge Super Bowl party years ago and everybody was making fun of me when the Pats were down 28-3. And I said, we've got them right where we want them. Then I might have turned around and flipped them all a double bird when the Pats won. I'm not saying I did. But I'm not saying I didn't either. Go Pats!
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Time to enjoy the evening then schedule my week for storyboarding/editing/and developing a movie budget for later. Nothing to see here. Back to editing.
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@Chris Dyer dude. You know how hard it is to find an honest contractor? Well I found one after 8 years named Andre Lopez. He practices English with me, and I Spanish with him. Morale of the story: keep an open mind I guess.
You can't have a vision without eye sight.
I thought of a silly video game movie. Tonight I finished two small scene's from the first two days of shooting. 9 tracks. I just have to get with my screenwriter and hire my voice and avatar actors now. 2, 2 hourhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mVu0_Ve9MEo shooting days. 1 week of editing. 3 minutes of movie. I should be in post within 5 months!
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Thank you David, you're close. She's a dark elf Dunmer in the world of Elder Scrolls, (it has an amazingly rich lore). They always look pissed off in this game lol, but! She's just been rescued from an opening scene where she almost fell prey escaping her evil parents during his guilds dragon hunt. She tells him after his enquiry: It's my parents, I just can't...(sobs) The last 5 shots ACT VIII b, is where the other of the two protagonists 'Aelen' from act I, is attempting to 'get' his fighter guilds to help defeat her parents/bad guys. Someone here suggested that to create tension, (aside from the story/script being expository, it needs a bit of tension), I ought to put in there that the fighting guild is apprehensive of joining their cause because of political differences with the Gods of the game. I thought that was a great idea! To your point about mediums and close ups I can but sparingly. Lips not moving is more like a dance than it is a transaction of language. Suspension of disbelief and all that. Thanks for watching.
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@Chad Desrochers My first and only other published movie that came out 3 years ago took 2 to make. My wife and I were 8 voice actors for it. Moving forward I have a budget, albeit modest. I'm building an army of actors now...while I storyboard/film the small scenes. Morale of the story: don't have your family and friends read your work. Get people that say nasty things to read/watch it, and listen to one person when deciding on what to bite off: YOURSELF. PS thanks for your critique. It's been a pleasure.
Actor or director?
Here's something that's been on my mind: I recently saw MARTY SUPREME, and whether you like him or not, Timothee Chalamet is an extraordinary actor. If you haven't seen it, it's directed by Josh Safdi who directed UNCUT GEMS. I also recently watched an episode of SOMEBODY FEED PHIL where a friend of his tells a story of how he was once on set watching a taping of EVERYBODY LOVES RAYMOND and how they did a scene, then right after, Phil (Rosenthal, creator & director of ELR) went individually to each actor and gave them his notes. They went again and the scene was so much better. So my question is, who's more important: actor or director?
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@Donovan Manuel does that team include an editor? if it's not 1/30th of a second I'm pissed.
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@Donovan Manuel an acquaintance director of mine said it's really hard to get with Sony but he did do a little WB stuff in Ireland that nobody knows about regarding lotr..I mean ...I didn't say that.
Friday's Coaching Session (Feb 6) What are your take aways?
Huge turnout today! This was our biggest yet. Every one of these is a learning experience for me. Especially seeing how the pages play out now that we're doing table reads and seeing how other writers respond. Curious what came out of today for you guys. @Temycka Carpenter Carlton @Jason Byrley @Jason Smith @Chad Desrochers @Anna Fermin @Pia Crawford @Shauna G @Iii Party @Krystel Biasotti @Chris Dyer @Ian Campbell @Lena Lieuvin @Piter Marek @David Hinnebusch @Godfrey Virgile We couldn't get to everyone and will get you in future sessions. Meanwhile, I need to create a sign up sheet of sorts here, so we can schedule more than one session out. But this platform doesn't allow me to do that, so any suggestions on how to do so would be appreciated!
Friday's Coaching Session (Feb 6) What are your take aways?
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I thought this song might give you two @Chad Desrochers and @Godfrey Virgile some love'n inspiration.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OhhOU5FUPBE
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@Anna Fermin I don't like first come first serve. I put my stuff up promptly. Oft' times I feel it's not as fruitful a session unless we deep dive into the nitty gritty of other's work, personally.
Condensing the Action
I've now read 3 other Forge members' scripts that i believe are really good at just getting to the point in their Action. I know there's more of you out here. My ask? How would you economize the following Action segment? -------------------------- She turns and sprints back towards the office. Jacob continues walking, his drink in hand, almost smiling as he walks past the now empty therapy rooms. At the elevator, he looks down an adjoining darkened hallway. The entrance is blocked by a cable attached to two stanchions. Jacob looks around then stealthily slips over the cable into the hallway. He’s the only person on the floor. It’s dark other than light coming from a frosted window on a door near the end. He slowly moves towards it. As he gets closer, the sound of faint voices is heard. Screaming voices.
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Yoda the 'It's dark. A light emanating from a frosted window coming from a door is the only thing that penetrates the pitch darkness.
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Hi, nice to meet you all. I average 25 hours/week using my video production skills and tools to create machinima. Real cinema in real'' virtual worlds

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