A little logline help, please.
Which one is the closest to being "the one"? Why is this sooo hard???? Any advice on how to improve would be much appreciated.
Perpetually sweating through designer clothes, a million-dollar matchmaker is great at everything — until her chaotic but loving family, a will-they-wont-they bestie, and a hot soccer star force her to confront the complicated truth that she may be the one person she cannot match. (45 words)
A Filipino-American matchmaker who’s made millions helping others find love, just paid a cowboy for sex. Now she must navigate impossible clients, an intrusive but loving family, and the complications of being spectacularly single. (34 words)
A Filipino-American matchmaker is brilliant at helping her million dollar clients find love. Now, she’s forced to confront the complicated truth that she may be the one person she cannot match. (31 words)
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A little logline help, please.
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