Freelancing and Cold Outreach - Let's Evaluate

I'm making this post today because I got a cold outreach today, and I almost felt like it was a threat and I say that jokingly. I know everybody gets spam; everybody gets emails that they don't want. And here is how this cold email reads.

"Dear Website Owner, If you have 5 - 10 minutes free anytime this week, I would like to talk to you about my plan on how I can help "revise your website" and "improve its performance". And no, I am not expensive at all! Think about it, if I can't convince you in 10 minutes, we'll pretend we never spoke, and I'll never bother you again. Let me know your thoughts. Best regards, Susan | Sales Advisor CK/CK."

👉 I think the thing that stood out to me the most was, "If I can't convince you in ten minutes, we'll pretend we never spoke, and I'll never bother you again."

Because that made me think: if I don't respond and I don't meet, will they keep bothering me?

📣 Does anyone have a way to improve the message that was sent to me? What is your pitch, since we are all mostly in the website business and trying to get business as freelancers?

The message you received was a perfect email. I'd schedule a zoom.

I liked the part that she is not expensive.

She at least called you website owner.

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