It's a long-ish sales page, so I don't expect granular critique.
But if you have a minute or two to skim it and see if anything jumps out, I'd appreciate flagging that.
I'm kind of immune to my own shortcomings... so I'd appreciate an extra pair of eyes or two on this.
Context: It's a sales page for my writing workshop Write Without AI (the name makes no sense, given that it's an email writing workshop and I'm already aware of that... 'tis what it is... for now).
Thanks in advance.