FIRST AND MOST IMPORTANT: DO NOT CREATE NEW POSTS OR THREADS IN OTHER CHATS ASKING PEOPLE TO SUBMIT THEIR COPY. YOU WILL GET BANNED. WE KEEP THINGS ORGANIZED. From now on, Every week or so I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin.

FIRST AND MOST IMPORTANT: DO NOT CREATE NEW POSTS OR THREADS IN OTHER CHATS ASKING PEOPLE TO SUBMIT THEIR COPY. YOU WILL GET BANNED. WE KEEP THINGS ORGANIZED. From now on, Every Sunday I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin.

FIRST AND MOST IMPORTANT: DO NOT CREATE NEW POSTS OR THREADS IN OTHER CHATS ASKING PEOPLE TO SUBMIT THEIR COPY. YOU WILL GET BANNED. WE KEEP THINGS ORGANIZED. From now on, Every Sunday I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin. P.S. The previous review thread will be deleted in the next 24 hours.

When most people get into copywriting, they think that they should only focus on mastering CJN, PAS, and DIC to write good emails. I'm here to tell you that those frameworks are not that good. Of course, those frameworks could help you, but there's a 100X more effective way to write emails. It's faster, it gets higher open rates, and more people buy. Here's The-3-Step-Process: 1. Get the target customer to open the email 2. Create the DESIRE to take action 3. Get the target customer to take action You get the target customer to open the email by writing subject lines that include at least 2 of these elements: - curiosity - something that's unexpected - benefit/dream outcome - pain/fear - personal - drama - crazy story - easy to understand Once the reader opens the email, we go over to step 2: Create the desire to take action. To do this, you can describe what their life looks like if they use your service/product or you can imply fear and describe how their life will look like if they don't change. Make this as CONCISE as possible. Don't waste a single word. Also, you have to build INSANE curiosity. After you create the desire to take action, you present them with one simple path to take action. This should be CRYSTAL CLEAR. Tell them exactly what to do. Also, make sure to sell the click, not the product. To sell the product we have a sales page, you just need them to click on the link. Here are some extra tips for u: 1. Put in a WIIFM (What's in it for me?) in the first few lines of your email 2. Keep your subject lines under 40 characters 3. Only have one big idea for every email you write 4. Only present them with one single path to take action 5. Make the first few lines in the email (before the WIIFM) super short and simple to read. This makes them hooked into your copy. Also, do this before you write the actual email (this will make the writing process 10 times easier): 1. find the customer bubble (beliefs, desires, pains, fears, failures, suspicions) 2. find out what the goal of the email is (what action do you want the reader to take / What lesson do you want to share?) 3. find out how you can make SURE they open the email 4. find out how you can get them to take action on the thing you want them to do

Hey guys, I need help with constructing my offer. Alex Hormozi says that we need to make our offers as valuable as possible and that we need to stack value. That's why I came up with a list of services that I'd do for my clients (as you can see below). Now, I'm just wondering if I should really offer all of these services or if I should ONLY focus on writing emails and get really good at that. Here is what I will do for my clients: 1. I build out a complete sales funnel for you (with email automation, sign-up page, sales page, appointment setting call page, etc.) 2. I will write all of the emails for the email automation process and sequence 3. I will run your weekly email newsletter with 4 emails a week 4. I will teach you how to build your own new sales funnels and all of the pages 5. I will teach you how to charge more for your products and still make more sales 6. I will log onto your instagram account and sell your product through the dm’s for you (WITH THE DM STRATEGY) Here are the bonuses that my clients will get: 1. A complete doc with all of the copy that I have written for you 2. A complete Video showing you exactly how you can build your own sales funnels email automation and sign-up pages 3. A complete doc with everything you need to know about how to close people 4. A complete DM script that allows you to sell your program in your Instagram DM’s What do you guys think?