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Quick Question to the Pros....
Hey bros, Need some help with my email game. So, Can you guys explain me about email structures Like, PAS, CJN? I'm going through the courses at the moment, but my main goal is to level up my emails atm. If possible, Can you guys provide me with examples as well? I appreciate all the pros that has helped me till now and in the future. I guarantee this is the best free online community I've joined ever. Let's get it.
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@Nayeem Khattak Got it, Thanks again
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@Nishchey Didwania Thanks again!
All formula are the same!
1) CJN (Challenge, Justify, Need) 2) PAS (Problem, Agitate, Solution) 3) HSO (Hook, Story, Offer) I (Challenge, Problem, Hook) stages: Purpose: Informing - Keep it short, intriguing. - Arouse positive emotions like excitement, love, curiosity, joy - Arouse negative emotion like fear, regret, scarcity - Highlight Empathy, Peace, Nostalgia II (Justify, Agitate, Story) Stages: Purpose: Intensity the discomfort in more detail. - Describe the story, but avoid chronology - Short sentences, avoid over exhaustion. - Transition reader to the CTA III (Need, Solution, Offer) Stages: Purpose: Call to Action, Hard/Soft Calls - Sell without feeling of selling - Positive calls highlighting benefits, confidence, relief, urgency, exclusivity - Negative call highlighting scarcity, missing out benefits/opportunity, loss Click LIKE below if you liked 😃
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@Nayeem Khattak Thanks for tagging, will definitely take advantage of this.
email review
drop it your email i will review them
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@Aditya Singh You got some crazy advice brother. Probably the best one you'll get in some time.
Can you critique this?
the copy is in this post but here's the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MNkozbE7_1HvjOwxuRFyLff_keuHBuNkhWgx3UjrZ3E/edit?usp=sharing SL: Getting gaslighted by doctors PV: what healed my gut PV(2): what healed Danyella's gut in 3 months “Take antibiotics to clear your acne %firstname%,” This is what my doctor told me everytime i came to complain about my extreme fatigue and bloating And it started to really affect me. Same thing happened to Danyella, Who quit birth control after taking it for 17 years but that was when it all started… Stubborn cystic acne. Non-stop swelling all over her body. And extreme nutrient deficiency. So she visited dermatologists, Then her obgyn, and her primary doctor. But they weren’t giving her sustainable solutions that actually solved her problems. And little did she know, the antibiotics were making her gut worse. Now she had constant anxiety, night sweats and sudden bloating. Danyella did some research and learned that she couldn’t find a solution, If she didn’t know why her body was reacting this way. So she took the Dutch hormone test, the G1 stool test, And tested for multiple nutrients in her bloodwork. She got access to all of these tests and learned everything that was wrong through the (name) method. Just 3 months later, Danyella’s - Skin was clear - Her bloating and swelling disappeared  - And she had the energy of her 20s back If you want to find out all of the other things that she did, then click here. And I'll share what you can do to fix your gut so that you can have the most energy without worrying about your health everyday. Xo, (name) Appreciate it
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Review and tips
Review my copy pls and give some tips https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cFZfOG7tUhTh4hQc6yDAg09bFX7ZhAPopF0pzBSr9Es/edit?usp=sharing
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DONE
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@Prathik Poojary Alright, Good luck Prathik
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Mohan Lama
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I help biz owners make more money with high-converting emails. Money, Fitness, and Self-improvement.

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