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Can you all review this and give feedback: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aYke5x3wX_7-HgmL8sGVrRVx0oVmVaU-rJaUL6xWdk4/edit?usp=sharing I didn't make a template, so it's just based on the words. I appreciate it.
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Any tips on writing a good P.S.?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ssS8evhmY3i9UmILWUzfvYP04zPbHFptlcV6HiEFiTs/edit?usp=sharing It's at the bottom of the email, please share how to make it better. Much appreciated.
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Like the Post and Drop your Emails Let me see What You guys were doing ;) I will Review it Asap P.S As always You can Ask Questions too & btw Liking the Post is necessary....
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Can u critique this one: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MNkozbE7_1HvjOwxuRFyLff_keuHBuNkhWgx3UjrZ3E/edit?usp=sharing Appreciate it
Can you critique this?
the copy is in this post but here's the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1MNkozbE7_1HvjOwxuRFyLff_keuHBuNkhWgx3UjrZ3E/edit?usp=sharing SL: Getting gaslighted by doctors PV: what healed my gut PV(2): what healed Danyella's gut in 3 months “Take antibiotics to clear your acne %firstname%,” This is what my doctor told me everytime i came to complain about my extreme fatigue and bloating And it started to really affect me. Same thing happened to Danyella, Who quit birth control after taking it for 17 years but that was when it all started… Stubborn cystic acne. Non-stop swelling all over her body. And extreme nutrient deficiency. So she visited dermatologists, Then her obgyn, and her primary doctor. But they weren’t giving her sustainable solutions that actually solved her problems. And little did she know, the antibiotics were making her gut worse. Now she had constant anxiety, night sweats and sudden bloating. Danyella did some research and learned that she couldn’t find a solution, If she didn’t know why her body was reacting this way. So she took the Dutch hormone test, the G1 stool test, And tested for multiple nutrients in her bloodwork. She got access to all of these tests and learned everything that was wrong through the (name) method. Just 3 months later, Danyella’s - Skin was clear - Her bloating and swelling disappeared  - And she had the energy of her 20s back If you want to find out all of the other things that she did, then click here. And I'll share what you can do to fix your gut so that you can have the most energy without worrying about your health everyday. Xo, (name) Appreciate it
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Can you all look at this https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lMskWjBAZpEM_h7r_NKqW1ow0o5qXLnM7bz8lOBLmf4/edit?usp=sharing and give honest feedback? Much appreciated
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