@Emmett McCarry the age target is necessary for this business as it only serves 40+ years olds that’s why. Also never had an issue with it in the past.

@Emmett McCarry sure I’ll give it a shot, appreciate the advice tho

@Uncle Jimmy Mitchell

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@Uncle Jimmy Mitchell

@Uncle Jimmy Mitchell thanks that was a perfect response, do I need to turn in advantage audience etc?

@Uncle Jimmy Mitchell perfect, I’ll redo my campaigns to everything I’ve learned on this group and update you on the results, perhaps a I’ll be the perfect case study

thanks you so much Jimmy, and @Thure Sander for answering all my questions in no time