Sonic’s ad for his affiliates works! First was Charles, and I just got one. All affiliates be on the look out. It works!

Ok, that video I posted in Instagram got me a couple followers and I think I might have a lead I could try. How should I go about this? Should I say hello and ask about her business or is that too strong? This is nerve-wracking haha

What do y'all think about this video I made? Any critiques or advice to fully make this work as I make more down the line?