You have an eye for film — rip this apart and help us remove the AI slop

We showed Tom, my business coach, a short AI-made video we put together last night to get his feedback since he has attempted.

It was rushed, but his main point was clear: the work has to be good enough that people don’t judge it as “impressive for AI”. it has to just work as a video.

I'm not sure if I'm hiding behind "choosing my preferred style of art" to justify NOT being good enough. I’d love more eyes on it from people who understand film, story, pacing, visuals, and taste.

Please rip it apart:

Specifically, what makes it feel like AI slop? I dont know, what I dont know.
Is this a quality video production(pacing, transitions, movement, etct) issue or is AI slop killing the video production itself?
What would make it feel more cinematic?

Attached below. Honest feedback is more useful than encouragement. 🤟💪

especially you

@David Stem

@Chad Desrochers

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