New Member Coaching Call Recap - 6-18-26

Big Swings, and Finding the Real Story Under the Story

Today’s New Member Coaching Call was exactly what The Writer’s Forge is built for: writers bringing in pages, hearing them read out loud, and discovering what’s really working — and what wants to go deeper.

We started by talking about something I want to do more of inside the community: pitch sessions and table reads.

Writers need to hear their work out loud. You learn things in a table read that you simply cannot learn staring at your own screen.

Then we jumped into pages.

@Jt Burleson

brought in “The Knock,” a tense true-story opening set against the mortgage crisis. The pages had real momentum, strong pacing, and a great hook: a family man caught between a threat to his home and a system where “the process is the punishment.”

The big note: don’t give away the emotional tension too easily.

If the husband is carrying information his wife doesn’t know, that secret creates pressure in every scene. Suddenly the story isn’t just about the external threat. It’s about the marriage, the father, the husband, the things he’s hiding, and the price his family may pay.

That’s where story starts to breathe.

@Kevin Cox

brought in “The Bad Man,” a Western short with Sergio Leone energy, grief, revenge, and a man pulled back toward purpose. The note there was about clarity and connection. Especially in a short, we need to know what emotional thread we’re tracking — and why it matters.

@David Broderick

brought in “The Chronicles of Enoch,” a biblical/ancient-world story with huge scope: fallen angels, Nephilim, Adam, Enoch, and a massive mythological canvas.

The core note: orient the audience earlier. The world can be enormous, but the audience still needs a simple human doorway into it.

That was the big lesson across the whole call:

The genre is not the story. The world is not the story. The premise is not the story. The character under pressure is the story.

Huge respect to everyone who brought pages. It takes guts to put your work in front of a room and hear it come alive in other people’s voices.

That’s the work.

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Thanks to all for attending, including our Premium members who show up regularly to support and welcoming in the new writers. That support is what this community is all about!

Dave

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New Member Coaching Call Recap - 6-18-26