FINAL DRAFT BIG BREAK FEEDBACK ON MY SHORT FILM!

Last month I submitted my short film Amos The Great to the contest Final Draft Big Break.

The contest offers to provide feedback prior to the contest results, and I just received it today!

It's very frustrating not to be able to have a conversation with the author of those notes, because there are some points I'd love to dig deeper.

But as the Forge People have been the very first to provide notes on this project, I wanted to share them with you all, along with the version of the script that I submitted. I feel so grateful for all of you, and for

@David Stem

's help on this. I haven't won anything but just getting official feedback from such a big contest is already something. Last week in the business talks we were talking about what "breaking in" means, I have to admit this already feels like a small break through for me! Baby steps ;)

I'm curious to get your opinions on the script and the feedbacks if you have time to read through!

Cheers everyone.

Appreciate you all so much 🫶🏻

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