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Dropping New Pages
I would like to post the continuation of my pilot for "GUARDIANSHIP" here, up to the end of Act 1 and the end of the "set up" part of the story. My teaser is 7 pages, Act 1 is 11 pages. This is an entirely new Act 1 from what it was even a few weeks ago, but I am taking it in a different direction based on feedback I got from last week's writing call. So I'm interested in how this is received, tbh, as anyone reading it will be fresh eyes on new material.
(Also, I'm not sure if this is the right way to post pages for feedback in this group, so let me know if I should do something different?)
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Dropping New Pages
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